Great concept and mostly good pictures. Photos of your vehicle may not be entirely on point.
So far as your American English prose goes … well, ah, there is room for improvement, put it that way. Much of the text is nearly unreadable. Go back to composition basics and work forward. That could take years, but would be time well spent. If you are serious, you will have an actual proofreader (competent English teacher, grad student, whatever) go over
your recent material and include proofreading marks. You could then study those and learn the various things in your writings that are going wrong. The prospective publisher will probably provide that. Also, there are many really good handbooks for writers available. Get one and consult it.
The chairman of the English Department, at a pretty good school I once attended, told the class that to become a decent writer one has to be prepared to throw away 90% of what they write. Harsh - but probably true.
You often refer to Norm and Norman. When it’s necessary to mention him in the text, use his full name or just his last. Your readers are not having lunch with the guy.
Photography is more your forte. You’re good at that.
